covered wagons

is there a word to describe the sound it makes against metal?

tink

tink

does not adequately explain the sound
of
the tap of the cigarette against the rim
or
the beating of my heart against your tin
exterior
inferior
feelings are against your pride

and is there a word for the invisible force?
or the sound it makes against flesh?

no.

most definately not.

maybe it's like magnets. or the pull of the moon.

and

as much as i love them. i've given up on finding the words.